Thursday, November 18, 2010

Writing - We are trying to describe using our senses.

It looks black.
It looks red.
It looks orange.
It looks yellow.
It feels super hot.
It feels like a tree.
It smells poisonous.
It sounds crackling.
- by Hayden.



A camp fire smells like fire. It burns.
It feels cold if you don't have a fire.
It looks dark with no firelight.
It sounds like some people are talking.
It's not that loud to me.
It tastes cold.
- by Terepai.




It looks like lots of people running.
People are getting wet.
Lots of people ar running into cars.
It smells like fresh water.
It sounds lik someone stomping in a puddle.
It feels like a dripping tap.
It tastes like water.
- by Georgia Plimmer.

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